Dylan. Plotwise, this is a bit sketchy. Artwise, you should definitely work on your style, both in how you do the art style and the animation process. This site hasnt turned to shit, but it wont look like that if you make it into something that isnt shit. I would suggest viewing a number of great flash movies and try to understand how various artists are able to do their styles. Also, you might want to look up how to make quality audio recordings. There is a movie here on NG that shows you how to make really good quality audio for next to nothing.
ill give you a 2.5 rating with a vote of 3, but keep in mind true value in what you do is reflected in how much work you put into it. Keep that in mind.